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“Life is a shiny toy, and I’m standing on the outside of the glass, looking in and desperately wanting to have it.

My bodily form is the glass; present, looked through but not upon.

My emotions are glass; fragile and easily broken.

I press my forehead to the glass, my nails clawing at the glass of my emotions as I stare at the life I want on the other side.

My teeth clench and transparent tears cling to my lashes.

My hands flatten on the glass as I feel the cold chill of my emotions on the surface.”
©2009 ~equinexus
:iconequinexus:

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A little analogy for us all. :shakefist:

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:iconevync:
For prose this is something else
and I mean that in a good way.
You give plenty of drive for a first person
narrative piece

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Being happy is better than being sad or angry, both are necessary; they show us just how nice happiness is.

~If you'd like something I've said to be clarified, just ask:)
:iconevync:
Your welcome:)

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Being happy is better than being sad or angry, both are necessary; they show us just how nice happiness is.

~If you'd like something I've said to be clarified, just ask:)

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